What you think of this quick rap i just wrote?

i get down for my thang, similar to mick foley i lay dem haters to the ground with a bang bang, sendin bullets to the brain, but that kills em with no pain, that fantasy just dont full fill, i should used a nife so i could hear em screem for there ffuucckkiinn life, all started cuz he saw all the cain that i be sellin, bbiittcchh thats what you get for attemting to start tellin